(and to mine)
Yesterday afternoon I started going through the wording on the home pages and tweaking it – I hope you don’t mind. It’s not that I think I can write better English than you, I think some of the previous wording was preferable from a normal point of view, but I was trying to ensure that all the terms I could think of that people might search on if looking for the church were included.
Need to check I’ve done all (‘cept Fifehead – no home page main content yet, and Todber, too little)
I will be making a few tweaks to other pages too also to help the pages show as well as possible in searches.